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Old 07-02-2013, 11:10 PM   #10
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you too work verk good together, with buddah having a nack for multi after multi and geno always bringing raw uncut gritty emotion this immediately became one of my favorite recent reads.

Fuck a president, I'm heaven sent, It's evident that I'm Czar of the people,
Once lethargic and peaceful now I'm bizarre and evil,
Armed and lethal to start upheavels that rock the foundations
That rip apart the steeples that sit atop the nations,
I begged God for patience but he blocked relations

this was very very nice bro, the lethargic and peaceful now bizarre and evil rhyme made me smile, don't see those words too much lol. also really enjoyed the following few lines.

To rip your eyes out, and restore your contacts like a memory chip
I'm on a ketameanz binge, seringe, with methanphetamine hits
A trip, that changes my perception of the world into a seventies twist
Isometrically gripped, the pounds per square inch in my hands amaze

that was fucking dirty, sometime when i read your shit i wonder where your minds at haha. but seriously though you just always come straight at the face as hard as you can. dope shit man.

thanks for the read guys
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