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I'm the kinda guy that gets nervous on purpose,
a masked circus of worthless to drown all of my burdens.
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I see you Objective***
DOPE opener ....nervous on purpose means the utmost self control and manipulation mannerisms. Indeed a masked circus....to drown well, anything. Props
you follow up the next line with sense to the first...I've been really working on my game in that aspect cat.
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I get cred for my work and I feel great cuz I was trying my hardest,
but as a jerk revising my tactics I realize I'm proud as a con-artist.
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good running themes, stung together well. Good flow.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned 'bout the text on my grave.
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lol, indeed.
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the hyphens learn connections like text-into-tone.
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smart
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After years of words turned into nothing I kinda feel sore and abused,
when I ask my friends what they think ... It's just boredom excused.
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A let down closer. Here is why...you established very well your circus con-artits ways...I have every reason by this presentation to believe that this character gives not one flying f#$k what his friends think....so why ask ?
Brilliant drop, content first (just the unity of themes), schemes second, then flow. In that order of impressiveness. true multi's or mosaic rhymes with more alliteration would set this off on another level. Lot's of inner rhymes and slants though...which everyone has down...elevate (not a diss, but encouragement. You got this). I also understand how difficult it is to make sense and come with such a polished presentation in terms of rhyme word limitations. props.