you evolved man, many don't...props
good intro man...kept the anticipation front on the edge of tha proverbial chair...was just waitin' for the bass to que drop
had a rza like feel
"make some enemies before you make that money boy" true
good vocal delivery...to offer a neg I'd say each of ya verses seemed like a 1st verse....maybe give each section more of a melodic presentation especially in the third verse. just seemed no change in energy and tone in the whole song, which gave this a tiresome feel toward the end....decent re-playability tho.
no hate, you got real talent.
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