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An omission of wisdom is frightful as time is envisioned,
The hype of the mission while the plight of life is permitted
But the chains of remission are voluntary for liftin’,
As time is my witness to my mind ‘s evolving condition.
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below a welcomed cadence break...
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It’s highly explicit what lies I permitted,
Time is my witness in decisions I live with,
Hatin’ was business and I rightfully missed that,
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etc...
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So while I’m amused with little life as my muse,
I try to refute what is bent to try to refuse,
With benefits due for my kind and minding my cruel,
The point of diffuse is the death in this life that I’m due,
The fallacies rule so they’re happy masked up as fools,
Half of these dudes with haphazard blasphemous rules,
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by this point I was flowing and already trenched in the flow...almost against my will. A nice break of cadence and more angles on the scheme would serve to lift this up in texture...
This was a hot flow...some mature introspection in this piece...good delivery
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What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
Last edited by Coup; 07-01-2013 at 07:26 PM.
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