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Definately agree with what everyone has said. This shit is pure dopeness with a strong message.

''stained gray behemoths slouch in slumbering stacks
concrete skeletons erected as a puzzle for rats.
the heavens are hidden hellishly in eruptions of ash
but you don't notice it - you're settled in a hustle for cash
to stay ahead you keep on pedaling combustible traps
like your unquenchable elephant bent on guzzling gas''

^ Fucking hell, that shit's raw as fuck. My fav lines of your piece I think.

Definately going to read this shit on a later notice as well. After reading the shit you posted on RIA as well you're leading on to become one of my fav writers. Keep it up.