Eating scallions over cow tongue; sigma 6 black belt – Malcrum
Reducing towns down to talcum, a plague in days without sun
^flow was dope on that bar. Most of your verse flowed seamlessly & the content was very nice as-well. I really enjoyed the overall theme of your verse aka swag.
pen resonantes with atonements, I'm beckoning opponents
with weapons and explosives
set to detonate with a nose flick and a featherweight control switch
^that was sick.
Overall your verse didn't naturally flow as well as rawns but you made up for it with swag, to an extend. Def. a good read.
Overall, I'm going to give this to Rawn for an overall more polished piece. I feel both had a dope swag feel throughout the verse but honestly rawns flow/content pushed his verse over the edge for me.
v/ Rawn. Feel free to RTF the favor in one of my battles, guys :)
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