[Split]

Geno. didn't like the scheming here tbh. didn't highlight your lyrical abilities that well. kind of detached, and deep/metaphorical, but it didn't grab me at any point. some cool metas thrown in there

Blood on my hands trembling from adrenaline
International thugs over land with combat boots instead of timberlands
Left our summer dreams to December cold nightmares
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And will my shadow still be friendly when the sun flips its switch
While the moon flourishes, you inhabit caverns afraid
Because the footstones of life are now attatched to a leg


Tyson. was feeling your whole drop... I love the twist on the topic, lots of emotion and good wording. Use commas though.

They set fire to my dreams now I'm suppose to bloom roses and hugs
I shrug at that expectation drugs calm that ex fixation
Fuck who provided the inclination that its ok to sacrifice my soul for a nation

nice.

I have Tyson winning. Connected to his piece more, pulled more enjoyable lines out and felt he took the topic farther in this battle. good match

v/tyson