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Cus when i flex an get the flow in motion, i turn heads with how my threads are woven
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The only decent line that really stood out to me. There weren't really any solid punches and the flow was a bit choppy. Alright rhyming but there are some places where the rhymes are weak. Overall a moderate verse cause your concepts aren't bad just need work on delivering punches stronger.
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Flow with ease with text its cheese so light camera action,
Metal drawn practice put the chrome to your adlibs to say your auto-tune bashed in.
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Compasition mix of bach and moz with a Hitler direction composing that deadly silent treatment.
Hold no secrets Im a deranged heathen.. Something you cant match with,
Go to the seamstress to have ur apparel and skin weaved in cuz the requested a clothes casket.
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The two lines that stood out to me the mos as far as punches go. You had a stronger flow and better rhyme scheme throughout your verse but But even these two punches could you some tightening up and rewording. Not bad though.
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