06-27-2013, 02:18 AM
|
#4
|
Guest
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gazette
You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
---no, too simple, plus don't explain ur punch---
Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
---to simple, plus the use of an ruined the chance of this workin' both ways the way u worded it---
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
---Not even sure what you said here, didnt sound like a diss to me tho---
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
---your connection works fine... horseplay/stable... however... theres not really much of a punch your wording is way off---
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try
---too simple/obvious---
pce, g'luck
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by Atomic
bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
---This was dope, best punch I've seen from you, wording was a bit off but still---
he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
---played---
god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
---connection works fine, hardly much of a punch tho---
just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
---tier/tear is wayyyyyyyyyyyyy played holmes---
guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.
---nah---
|
Both were weak...
Keys tho, so no complaints. Gazette's wording sucks, Atom had just old concepts in this verse.
His first bar took it for him
V/ Atomic.
|
|
|