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Old 06-27-2013, 02:08 AM   #8
Atomic
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I get ladies easy as fuck, and I'm able to always stay up in it
Any of X girlfriends... become one of those in a matter of minutes
lolz, nicely worded.
My place is an overpopulated city, everyone wants to pit here
But Nubian Desert, with as many friends as people that live there
coo
You smell really bad, you really need to try and start pure
Because your as Fresh as Billy and Lars telling us they are her
dece
You stalking me is mad weird, get near me don't try son
I buy a wallets to keep you away, u don't have enuff money in urs to buy one
coo
I'll throw u in a dumpster faggot, leave u there to bleed in
Fuck a punch this line is filler... Its not like I'll even need ten
OOOOOOO SHIT, NIGGA HE THREW AWAY A BAR THIS COCKY LIL NIGGA.

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ur a wreck n' yah skills tragic, this fake ain't fit for no belt...
if someone directed u to do a f@ggot, method just act as himself.
meh
..& honestly ur not fly kid. Just a little birdie from the Lou..
you can't help but to ride dick, then wonder why it hurts when u poop.
lol wtf.. no
I wouldn't call em' Larry if this burd ball'd since he more the Cable guy type.
fucking hick can't write nothing that shines, he's like a failed highlight.
ok, i see what u were tying but the connection is very poor.
every weekend has to call his baby mom collect to make bail by night..
The Hangover is like this geeks guidelines, his tale should be labeled High-Life.
mehhhh nah man, not hitting
now I'm burying this bitch in his city, but he still hopes ima pardon his pen..
I'm usually not one to judge, meth... but when u write it's like ur breaking everyone of the cardinal sins.
lol okay, not bad, ur best bar by far.

v/ meth. he actually had a very solid verse, besides his last bar of course. xNub, your concepts aren't very hard hitting to begin w/, but ur connections are weird as well. Sometimes it's like ur punch doesn't even connect w/ ur concept whatsoever. Try to read some battles from top battlers so u can attempt to elevate.

good battle guys.
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