[Objective]

Flo: Enjoyed some of the concepts but felt the execution of them was rather bad. I didn't feel the extinguisher shit either and I personally think that was your weakest lines. I thought this was dope tho';

''I can skate the entire Michigan lake mate while texting dominos yo daughters pizza order''
^lol, that's swag, haha.

Also thought the closure was decent, but nothing outstanding.

Al Po: I liked the first 4 bars, shit was dope. Then that office/repeat the process was a decent idea but I didn't like the execution tbh. It seemed to be a rather clumsy building of the sentence than anything else imho.

''I’m sitting high on my own horse, and my steed catches Contact….
That FUCKING ALIEN GAVE US A SHOTGUN CHARGE!!!….and I can’t recollect anything beyond that''
^ Didn't really feel this made any sense. Some story leading up to this about who the alien was, a ruler of the universe or whatever would have made it different, cuz as it stands now the line seems rather ''empty''.

Everything after that was kinda ''meh'', you're supposed to SWAG it out way above anything else. Third degree arms dealers? Well, fuck you, I make next gen weapons in underground labs. See what I mean?

''We scavenge the ER for burned amputated limbs and sell em on the black market''
^ This could have been a lot stronger, ''we'' exchanged with ''I'' makes it stronger because it shows that you don't need help for example, and scavenging limbs at the E.R. seems to be at the bottom of the chain as well. Exaggerate dammit, but it needs to make sense! I know you can do A LOT better than this.

Vote: Al Po, felt he had the better verse overall and the first 4 lines was fire as well. Yeah, he kinda edged it for the rest of the verse as well. Ok battle.