ACTIVATE:
dope piece. crafted an interesting story out of a the topic that still felt tightly connected - and instead of making the entire piece about it, instead it played an integral part to it.
nothing much to say except consistent with the multis, good story, and smooth flow throughout - I feel like I've definitely seen your stuff before, but this one seems to me to be one of the best.
fraze:
a far far more abstract take on the topic - decent rhymes and some multis, but because of the abstraction, you felt comfortable also abstracting the smoothness of the sentence structure which, against a polished and smooth read, feels jarring. this hurt you.
also, despite a similar "expanded on the topic beyond the topic's presented scope" approach, I couldn't connect the topic nearly as neatly to your take as to your opponents.
all said,
mvgt ACTIVATE
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