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Originally Posted by Regulator
You’re king of the hill? The shit I do to bitches you couldn’t bare to watch
I’ll cure ur girls migraine leaving nothin behind but a calling card and a pair of socks
nice callback to the boomhauer line from last week. don't love the punch tho
You’re fuckin with a sinner and with a name like saint you ain’t no one to fear.
ur so fake ur ghost writers visit me, telling me how I changed over the years.
i really don't get this
He not posing a threat, flowing with vets, only thing he has is a long list of champs.
aint is even in ur name, that's what voters say, followed by he's dog shit and can't.
this is kind of humorous but a soft punch
If you complain about votes, the fucked up part is you didn't choose to die bitching.
Because dominate's sharing the blame too, he forced you into a suicide mission.
best bar so far
You think ur best punch is the rock, but when I swing I'm handing you the boulders.
The way I brush saint off, u would think I only want the devil standing on my shoulders.
nice concept you didn't word this well enough to be an effective punch. harsher word choice like 'knock saint off' and introducing the angel/devil concept to a setup bar before the punch is one possible approach
Bring that bull shit against me, this battle will be like showing ur red rag to a crip set.
Post first when its AI, but a real battler? like the tourney graphic ur ink aint even drip yet.
this is just ok. cool tie in to the graphic but lacks impact
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Originally Posted by Saint
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=160009
Eviction, Dia!sick.. bro
Title belts in 2025!? lol...this loser thinkin "how can this NOT fail!"
Lil Shrimp is a trophy catch he'd 3D print & hang in glass like a cocktail
nicely worded in general but slightly wordy in the 2nd bar. cool punch and flow tho
If Dia has a top bar in the mag know Dom wasn't strict to quote shit
that'd make such an uproar a Don't Disturb sign will be next to the Eviction notice
like the concept. something is off about the punch to me but quality wordplay. its def been used before but cool
Ur concepts + wording got me so lost; problem is ur flows off
Those lines like every diss-solving filler.. they'd followup a botched botox
word play is kind forced here but the flow is tight
A dying moms wish had 'em binge eat allll up in her basement
Fatass let himself go at-will so fast his waistline sued for wrongful termination
this is a joke book punch line. not feeling it
Ur girl stay on corners.. cardates anytime/place schmoes like to stick it
within 15 mins she'll jump a Hotrod & get AAA for her Roadside assistance
nice concept again but wording is off to me
&Bro don't raise ur voice without sack or blood to back it up
cuz 'id beat Reggaton down w/ hooks more repetitiously than Latin clubs
this doesn't work for me, but still nice flow
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Regulator had suicide mission, with the opener and devil standing bars being decent. You should work on your concepts and wordplay. If your bar doesn't have something thats clever or deliver a strong diss to your opponent it's not really effective in text battles. Also, you're not using your first bar to set up your punch. It's not a requirement to do, but it makes it easier to develop your concept so you can focus the second bar on an effective punchline. This is a notable difference between the verses in this battle.
Saint had the opener mostly, but eviction notice, botox, AAA were all notable as well. Didn't love all of the wordplay attempts but the verse was well constructed and you had a solid flow going throughout. enjoyed the read overall, seems like you know what you're doing.
Vote: Saint. Looking back punch by punch Saint didn't blow me away with anything, but he had a consistent level of quality. Enjoyed 1 bar from Reg, but he didn't have enough behind that to pull off the win.