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Old 06-27-2013, 12:40 AM   #13
Gazette
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I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!


- good multies, i think u got a bit too caught up in em which made your punches suffer a bit, but the creativity was there. wasn't very personal, 1st 2 bars were too fillerish

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First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth



man ur ideas were really underdeveloped, some of the concepts had potential but you didnt capitalize at all, impersonal also, you needa orginise ur punches / set-ups better n just think about em more


v/ amalgam
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