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Old 11-30-2024, 11:38 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Mike Wrecka View Post
You’re kind of moving into poetry at this point. Well getting close. This shit is actually a bit of a mind fuck. Telling your past self to kill themselves. Why not just off yourself in the present ? Perhaps because now there are people that rely on you so you can’t end things. And then knowing your former self is ignoring you , meaning you never thought or cared about the future. Really captivating themes going on here. Your writing has gotten more simplistic in its rhyming but deeper and more thought provoking. Thanks for the read
Encouraging people to kill themselves is certainly a choice

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