BH
Okay, I’m going to nitpick a bit here. First, that’s not a pitbull in the picture—it looks more like a beagle, which is a far cry from a fighting dog. Also, I’m a little unclear on one part: did the dog in your story kill its owner, or was someone or something else responsible? That transition threw me off a bit.
That said, this was a really dope piece. While it was loosely tied to the photo, I could still track your train of thought. You captured the perspective of a pitbull—a breed often raised and trained for violence—facing punishment for a life it was essentially forced into. The way you framed this story made it feel both brutal and sympathetic. I thought you nailed the balance between viciousness and vulnerability, especially toward the end.
The way you wove your opponent’s name into the story was super creative, turning the battle into a high-stakes figurative clash. From a technical standpoint, your writing was on point—compact bars, clean multis, strong internals, and a crisp, steady flow. You brought a raw intensity to this piece that I really enjoyed.
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Scar
It’s been a while since I last read your work, and this piece reminded me why I’ve always enjoyed it. Your verse felt poetic—almost Shakespearean, though maybe more akin to another classic author I can’t quite place. Either way, it flowed effortlessly, and your word choice was both elegant and effective.
There’s not a ton for me to critique here because, as you said in the piece, it’s a “timeless melody” about man’s best friend, and that sums it up perfectly. You painted a beautiful picture of a country dog living its best life—running free, chasing things, performing tricks, and being the quintessential loyal companion. It had a nostalgic quality that made it a joy to read.
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This was an interesting battle with two very contrasting styles. BH’s piece was gritty, raw, and visceral—like an early internet video of a dogfight, disturbing yet captivating. Scar’s, on the other hand, felt like a serene 1900s oil painting—a nostalgic portrait of simpler times in the countryside.
Both pieces were great for entirely different reasons, which made choosing a winner tough. Ultimately, though, I found myself more drawn to BH’s intense imagery and raw emotional depth over Scar’s whimsical poetics. That said, this was a close call, and I enjoyed both pieces a lot.
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