JD: Eyebrows was worded a lil awkward but still solid. The rest was light. V-dick wordplay is pretty forced, Mumbai is better at wp but punch was weak. Closer was bad.
Mono: Not much to discuss with respect to standard battling in terms of setup/punchline with wordplay and multi syllable rhymes. The astrology references were cool but not sure if it's the most effective approach for text battling. Good luck tho, keep at it.
Vote: I think JD got this.
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