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Dove Dozer · 06-26-2013, 04:42 PM

I didn't enjoy this at all tbh. it was awkwardly worded and I felt it lacked cadence. there was some internal rhyming, but I felt technically this piece was lacking.

keep writing.

06-26-2013, 04:42 PM	#2
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	I didn't enjoy this at all tbh. it was awkwardly worded and I felt it lacked cadence. there was some internal rhyming, but I felt technically this piece was lacking. keep writing. __________________