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Originally Posted by 2 Beautiful
I'M NOT LISTING TO kEN... I know I got skills & I can sing really good.
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You may be able to sing. However your written lyrics are simple and elementary. You need depth to your content. One word syllable end rhymes just dont cut it. You need to elevate your technical writing plain and simple. People that are telling you its hot, are 1. full of shit 2. After your pussy, or 3. both #1 and 2.
if you can say something with meaning, introduce more than 1 syllable to your rhyming words, change your scheme up to include internal rhymes you will come across much more skilled.
elevate.