10-27-2024, 08:52 PM
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#8
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Pakistani Hand Cannon
you lying son of a bitch.
"all my haters shaking like vibrators"...vibrators. fuck you bro.
mike - i thought your shit was aite, till i actually listened. your verse is garbage. your deliver it aite though, mostly. irony right after you say "cadence is contagious" you struggle the next line lol i liked the closer. apart from that your verse is dookie. pen to line paper, hiatus, go through these phases, void left on these pages....tf is this a verse about you writing? uninspired as fuck. when i am awakend - souls have been taken line hard aswell actually.
master - unorthodox. & dig it. idk what that whole oscillation indication fibulation shit meant, but it sounded hard lmao your flows weird - as opposed to an atypical one like your boy before you - but its not off beat. your deliveries weird aswell idk, i prolly wouldn't bump it. but i like the originality
eye - i hate your voice bro. i didnt hate your verse though. not sure why to be honest. your energies good. idk, like trigger pop & freeze - came easy - for others, its trigonometry...nothin crazy, but its aite - maybe strictly owing to how you put it across, idk. & you had a couple switch ups - & in a short verse - & tbh they all worked.
& this beats ass.
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