[Soule]

No offense but... what?

Ever. Did you really write a piece about a member? I mean. Been there, done that, but what in the Great Value Baron Mynd are you doing? Lol. The flow was consistent but the scheme was simple. Reminded me of the stuff I was writing in middle school on RB. Straight forward. Not a lot of depth or build up. Basically just writing to write. There wasn't anything here that really stood out to me.

Technically, this was better. I liked it until the last part. I respect the concept but it went from dramatic and intense to "nerd waking up from a dream with a mankind changing idea" real quick lol. One of the reasons I hate these battles only being 32 lines. That's like a beginning and half a middle lol. This was much better than the other three pieces in this round though. Good job.

Vote Dom and I don't understand how this isn't a KO. No offense to his opponent but wtf lol. Not even close.