Scar.
Ok so this was such a dope showing from you bro. Simply put the schemes and wording where just flawless. The way you managed to say so much yet keep it short and sweet was amazing. I think this is my favorite verse of the week, I still haven't read headless or either way so we will see. So far though lol. Any way another strong point to this piece is the almost effortless imagery you managed to create with your words. Also you took the topic and ran with it. Thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Props homie.
Sym
Another dope piece here. I felt like you matched scars wording and flow perfectly. The difference I guess is you went with a more story driven verse ehile i felt scar was a bit more abstract. I gotta say you imagery was also on point. Like scar you managed to bring the topic to life. I eill say you did a better job connecting you words to the topic. I think overall your verse was spot on to the topic, slightly edging scar in that aspect.
Overall
Man this was a dope battle. Both came with the heat. Scar with the imagery and wording. Sym with a more cohesive and better connection to the topic. This was a tuff one to vote on but honestly I think what was the deciding factor more me was scars imagery. Simply put his verse was beautiful lol. Dope battle fellas. Scar gets my vote
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