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Old 10-12-2024, 07:47 PM   #10
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I've been avoiding voting for this one because it's the best battle of the tournament in my opinion and I honestly don't think I can give it the justice it deserves.
Scar

she sang the blues
complex melodies tatted along a patch perusing the back movement of her neck.
Afternoon. Perhaps a glass or two.
It was a habit. Soon she’d hit the sack for two or some hours of sex.
Then Showered and dress.

I love the structure here. The flow. The whole story is beautiful with great imager and air of anxiety and insightfulness.

Symetrik

She was a path to relief. Eating apples and peach pie,
we would laugh through the weeks and dabble in sweet lies,

your whole verse I guess we call it here, was beautiful but this really picks up at the end and made my heart beat a little faster.

Which is the only reason mvgt Symetrik

Both of them have great motion but Symetrik relayed it to the audience just a bit more.

Very hard for me to choose.

Goodluck guys.
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