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ether:
dope, it was a bit simpler in the all round piece but some of the lines were fire compared to what i read from you.. emotion was strong throughout the whole piece.. basically what carries it is this girls internal struggle leaking out into her garden.. very dope.. the darkness was raw but was most of what was simple for the verse, not in the way you only just touched on it and not in the way the good over powered evil like the verse is just sort of like you didnt want to face it.. so it comes off as sloppy writing.. anywhoot tight drop..

headless:
holly ish dope i have personal connect because my father died that way.. but the entwined stories and flip on the topic was dope.. the rhyme structure in some lines was hot as fuck the story progression a killer man probably the hotest thing about it ther then the use of topic.. the emotion had more depth then eth.. and character was more developed..

vote = headless versemen

he excelled in alot of categories eth did not.. which still made for a challenging battle but a one sideone imo.. g/l you guys