[Flow]

Originally Posted by Rawn MacDon

While u hand off to the P.D., Im screening Panzer’d Lamborghinis'
Sing Soprano w Houdini cuz when in Rome, all that tone gets U Gandolfini'd
nice flow no punch
Give 4 pumps to nik-A's Jordans, the way us Fla brahs' hoard guns
in fact the only time this jock-strap’d is wearing that, along with his support cup
not really a punch, not what I would consider one anyways, nice flow though
u never had the heart to start, not on varsity or for ur alma-matar
Shts clear when the college doctor prescribes ur offensive line's as beta-blockers
lol that was pretty dohpe and fresh
I'm amazed that kids have the audacity to call him something great
when his punches land-phil appears in that place, with written product dumping waste
nice word play
i never walk a girl home, i spit my shit on deck to hit n work they frame
while everything bull-pens strikes out, and couldn’t take a bitch out pitchin perfect game
nah

your execution is way off, I think your focus is to heavy on the flow and rhyme scheme. Just a tip, you had some nice bars near the end

Originally Posted by Philly

It's sad you can't even tell how wack you are.

Look...
Sorry for trashin your plans, but u don't have a chance in this battle here man
Think u'll be gettin no L this week?...homie, I really hope for u that ur a Cavaliers fan
weak statement
Prolly just hearin the story this late, but I fucked that little whore that u date
& EVERYONE knows I smashed that shit. It's like Aaron Hernandez & his security tape
weak
She's gross too, that pussy was was like the loosest darkest hole bro
You & ur boy could both jump in, and still have ample room for Marco polo
lol - better
My punches break ur grill yo... go put that under ya pillow when you sleepin bitch
The toothfairy'll leave a note like "Philly killed u, here's a couple bucks u piece of shit"
lol random but made me chuckle
Since 11 I listened to the Lox...that's prolly why I never liked fiction
I can tell u didn't grow up on D-block...
and you were someone's "baby girl" if u were EVER in prison
meh pretty easy, not that great, all your comments come off to much like statements - a lacking in concepts but with some funny swag

tough shout - ill edge it to philly for more lols