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Old 09-04-2024, 12:17 PM   #11
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- "we don’t commune with these inner voices"
- "fight fire with ire & find the pain bolstered."
- "we don’t commune with these inner voices"
- "& please don’t confuse the calmness for a absence of capacity for carnage"

This whole piece was fire. But the above lines stood out to me the most. I like Objection mention, I enjoyed the combination of swag and flow and substance, and technical execution. It was like a passive aggressive, cocky stream of consciousness that had some real depth to it.
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