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Old 08-12-2024, 03:17 PM   #9
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This was pretty sick, love the imagery you bring to a piece.
Once you hit that groove you never really let up and beast.
I know everytime your name pops up round here it's dope.
Kind of "Old Man & The Sea" type shit I'm catching with the flow.
Overall dope shit.

A lusciously lavish lime-green grows festered with fauna
as young whippersnappers seek less treacherous waters.
The septic old stalwarts are stuck in their ways
full of selfish importance and reluctant to change.

^^ got a chuckle out of me, keep it up.
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