[Flow]

Originally Posted by Meth

Who the fuck is this faggot?

Let's Dance

I get ladies easy as fuck, and I'm able to always stay up in it
Any of X girlfriends... become one of those in a matter of minutes
lol I just wrote that exact bar pretty much for my battle with him - going to have to hive it to you lol
My place is an overpopulated city, everyone wants to pit here
But Nubian Desert, with as many friends as people that live there
hmm pretty fresh/very creative nice
You smell really bad, you really need to try and start pure
Because your as Fresh as Billy and Lars telling us they are her
lol
You stalking me is mad weird, get near me don't try son
I buy a wallets to keep you away, u don't have enuff money in urs to buy one
solid
I'll throw u in a dumpster faggot, leave u there to bleed in
Fuck a punch this line is filler... Its not like I'll even need ten
everyone loves a cocky prick

Originally Posted by Xnub

ur a wreck n' yah skills tragic, this fake ain't fit for no belt...
if someone directed u to do a f@ggot, method just act as himself.
the whole method act thing was a great concept, just not executed right
..& honestly ur not fly kid. Just a little birdie from the Lou..
you can't help but to ride dick, then wonder why it hurts when u poop.
I hate lines like this - I expect this from an aspiring 10 year old
I wouldn't call em' Larry if this burd ball'd since he more the Cable guy type.
fucking hick can't write nothing that shines, he's like a failed highlight.
mmm its ok - good idea but not a great way of going about it, you have the concepts in mind its now just about really thinking on the best way to word them and deliver them
every weekend has to call his baby mom collect to make bail by night..
The Hangover is like this geeks guidelines, his tale should be labeled High-Life.
lol this was awful sorry
now I'm burying this bitch in his city, but he still hopes ima pardon his pen..
I'm usually not one to judge, meth... but when u write it's like ur breaking everyone of the cardinal sins.
statement and no sting

better showing then I expected - saw some creative concepts from xnub but meth took this easy with a solid example of how 10 lines should look in the league