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Originally Posted by Objective
Mike said he was gonna pass on that @ sral
Also, @ Scar, there was no underlying message to the story I wrote this time around. I wrote that story for the sake of it just being a story altho I did start 1-2 with concepts of that nature in mind. The vast majority of my topicals got an underlying message, symbolism, metaphors and/or personifying aspects of mental health but figured while writing that not all stories needs it.
Sometimes it can be nice with just a story and just that. However, in order for it to hit well it needs to be done well enough/to perfection which my piece needed quite a bit of polishing to achieve to say the least. At least vs the level of writer I was up against |
thats great and i always appreciate underlying message metaphors and stuff like that but i just didn't think it was communicated that well in this particular piece. I can pick on nuances, i can assure u.