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Old 07-20-2024, 02:36 PM   #18
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pretty cool battle, you both seem to be talking about the same thing. Etherwave piece seems to be a discertation on some form of pschological distortion dictating a dependency on mechanics. this line was cool

"We didn't fall, we just never reached grace"

Master ventured into some kind of Terminator mech apocalypse thing. it worked well with the picture but i think it failed in translating what was being said (a personal take) bout the concept. it was long and full of imagery but at the end of the day i didn't really didn't know wht was being translated.

master's my dude but this one goes to Etherwave. The verse was a bit more nuanced.

v/ Etherwave
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