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Old 07-14-2024, 05:04 PM   #11
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i've got an hour or so
to make a mountain of gold

Loving the intro, so simple yet adds on to the atmosphere of what kind of piece it'll be from the title. That's some real good shit right there for me.

guide me back to empathy, i'm searching for hope
^This was poignant as well.

And the closure hits as well. Loved the read despite its rather dark and melancholic depressive state, beautiful write up. Hope this isn't as personal as it seems, and if it is you're able to put your struggles to paper in a captivating, thought provoking and emotional way that doesn't come off as someone feeling sorry for themselves, it just is what it is with thought and contemplation attached
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