I like how you both related the picture to different mental struggles. Adhd and suicidal ideation and what not. I saw the picture before anyone wrote and wondered what yall would come up with.
SYM (As they've been calling you, and I'll join in)
but all of it’s bogus, and I realize that I’m lost in my thoughts,
I’m so distractable, and I’m sure it’s gonna cost me a lot… this is my favorite part. The whole world you bring to life here, the character...it's vibrant and....familiar. I don't know. Very creative I'm burnt out on voting cause i worked 71 hours this weak, so imma be a little short, but In summary, I loved this story. The best thing is it ending in exhaustion that's very whole and creative
Reg
I wanted you to rhyme clusterfuck so bad I don't know why, lol. I really loved this piece though. Very emotional and edgy. Beautiful flow.
Both being great pieces, the only thing that sets them a part with me, is energy. I felt that Sym had more energy and life to his story. Granted the other is about suicide I think, so it wouldnt be full of life, but that's not what I mean, the picture gives hyperactive brain, overload type vibe and I think Sym captured that perfectly. Really the only difference in creativity that I see to make a choice. They were both on point. But the first thing I kind of thought of was a bad ass kid when I saw the picture. So I just related more to it with regards to the topic.
V-Sym
Last edited by Etherwave; 07-14-2024 at 05:11 AM.
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