Yo, I'm here to save the day
So Nigma's was cool, but it kind of just felt weird when i was reading it. I don't know what it was but something just felt... off to me. I have no idea why, or what just something wasn't right in your verse. I don't know. I did enjoy it though, it wasn't a great story, imo but you executed it well
Frank's i loved. The story had me the entire way through, if I wasnt lazy I would have been on the edge of my seat the entire time just waiting for what was going to ensue. Thought it was dope no complaints. I didn;t love the rhyme scheme but for me, just my opinion the story telling is more important than having slick multi's or what not.
Anyway, cool battle, good luck to both in future writing endeavors
V/ Frank
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Adonis