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Old 07-12-2024, 11:16 PM   #2
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Short and sweet lil piece of questioning the bigger things in life, or perhaps it's a metamorphosis of self? Whether it's for better or worse seems to be for the future to figure out. This piece also reads a bit like finding a new love interest or a new best friend but you're not quite sure whether or not they'll be good for you.

Either way, the opening line wasn't that clear to me:
"You're a kind of like a mystic. "
^A kind of a mystic, or like a kind of mystic?

Besides of that hiccup I enjoyed the read and the stream of thoughts/questions you put me through through the eyes of your protagonist.
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