cat went in on this...real facts spit too...lot's of cats in this for pats on the back and not improvement...flow was sharp with angle lines to cut the brick of the dense halfwits...kept my attention man.
liked how this came out my mouth: Claim they hol it down on they corner
gave a sense of authenticity which was needed to back up your separation from the pack of needle nosed pocket protector stans.
I'd like to see you move from the observational into the 3rd person expressionist...see what you can do on that front...you got this down
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What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
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