[Objective]

Felt it was swag & flow but with actual content within.

Love the transition of tone and development of your piece here:

we don’t commune with these inner voices
seeking help - but never voice it, direct
& yet we seek to destroy, in contempt
see the poison in self avoidance, what’s left…

look out, im spiraling…
look round, but find within
the self put downs are vile things.
put down the violin. dial in.
^Fuck yeah, this shit breeds hope for those in need