I’ve got you, jungle leaves.
I thought the opening was fire. I liked the seemingly endless stream of consciousness rhymes, rapid fire delivery, but when you got into the Latin verbiage it kicked up another notch entirely IMO.
Fathers daily sponge bath made me laugh.
Touché got che in it was fire.
Felt the Duke Nukem line too.
Keep your pen moving!
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