[Witty]

From a technical standpoint this was just ok. From an emotional standpoint it was very good. Very relatable.

You lied through this entire verse. You probably don't know it but it's incredibly clear. You love this person and you will never be content with just being friends. I'm sure you want nothing but the best for whoever this is about but the friendship you had will never be the same. You're in love with someone who will probably never feel the same. I've been there my friend, it's an awful feeling and I feel your pain, I really do.

This entire verse was a lie. You lied about how you feel to the reader and probably to yourself, and that's what made it so good. That's what makes art so special.

Chin up. Thank you.