heartful.
im glad you didnt filter it heavily through the process of tryna rhyme syllables & fitting a certain structure etc - which while maybe be technically proficient (id argue that), but ultimately actually compromises the art...or heart, whichever you feel.
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He elevated early, i miss him
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hardest (or, really softest...but that aint "cool") line to me. no wordplay. fuck what you rhymed with it. just. simple. truth.
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Punishing blows, made me feel fuckin disowned
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it aint the licks that hurt, right? tough.
these two though...
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Hatred just wants to explode
Raising my brother myself
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might just speak to your character. if you know what i mean? i know personally, older brothers who aint get treated right...but aint look to raise the younger, & instead the perpetuated the abuse.
anyway, love.
head up, & heart open.