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Originally Posted by Witty
Imo this is a masterpiece and I don't believe many people here could have done this.
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Your self praise is warranted here. Coming from the land where law of Jante is king I still find you to be proud of this work in order.
"Castigate compassion" was great, the switch up in flow surprisingly sudden but not unwanted. Closure simple and poignant while maintaining a complex flow without seeming cluttered or excessive. Content and the heart of this piece as a whole is dope af, too
10/10, will read again. Left inspired
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