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Old 08-12-2023, 07:10 PM   #15
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Back from hiatus.
But Sym gets props for holding it down.
If extra points can be rewarded he get them all.

The verse was light in comparison to halo but I love the tenacity.
Broken went in-depth and really built a story especially with the bar, "Born to serve and never question their dignity,
Worthless, with no purpose, no service, no memories of infancy."
The was fire my man.
Quotable from sym,"And if that's not enough? suck it up. you've chosen this.

oh, nice, now you're in love. that's not a full handful on top of the other stuff.
and now, great, she's pregnant cuz you slipped up once.
honestly, no wonder your friends from high school got hard into drugs..." Fire.

I am giving it to Broken for a more developed narrative and thought out story line. Both did great, but Broken did more... Don't sleep on Sym.
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