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Old 05-23-2023, 10:00 PM   #7
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Wow...just wow...Great match, both verses where drastically different and beautiful done. This is probably the best narrative verse I seen off of Halo. I can't recall reading a Sym verse but I loved the emotion (probably did in the past) and pacing, it truly intrigued me. I would say this is a tie...if it was based on this one thought: I feel that Halo's verse didn't have a full conclusion at the end, and the finalization of it felt rushed in the last section. On the other hand Sym's verse felt concluded, especially how it was brought back to memories of the past. As much as I dislike to vote against the legend Halo, I got to give it to Sym.
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