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Old 05-22-2023, 06:02 PM   #5
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Wow great battle..

Imo...

Brokenhal0

Clearly had a better verse. The storytelling was phenomenal. The multies very great. Loved the creativity. Metaphors were rediculous. Loved reading this piece tbh.

Very very impressive my friend. Keep up the great work.

As for symetrik

Not a bad verse, kept on topic well. The flow was good but some of the lines felt forced. The rhymes weren't as clean as your opponents. Nice verse like I said the story was consistent but the rhyming seemed a bit off a times. Very close battle though. Halo just had a really well written verse.

Keep dropping brotha.

Props to both.

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