Sinacog - first, are you civil rawr?
there are a lot of rhymes in here that are just there to rhyme and don't make cohesive sense. the only topical tie is mentioning the cat, random capitalization... this is a mess and seems like a throw-away verse if you're NOT civil - as if you either you expected your opponent to do poorly or just not show.
Dope girl
why do you both use the word blazing
this is more on topic - the cat is having attention doled upon it, and although your grammar and whatnot are atrocious, at least you stuck to the topic a lot better than your opponent. some things were too abstract IMO for the piece (playing guitar) and some things were heavy filler ("all that", "looking fly in a hat") so again, throw-away? although I've probably always ragged on your style I've also seen you do better than this.
mvgt Dope girl
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