Bqrc had a good verse.. jaws of lyf, backgammon, wing toast.. a nice change from the rb wp/uterus stuff lol. Gambia dece, mounts was kinda corny but works tho
Gamble had Barclays.. seems rusty and style is longbar-esque.keep at it, shorten some wordy parts.
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Last edited by Saint; 04-29-2023 at 06:14 PM.
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