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Old 04-29-2023, 05:21 AM   #8
Lyfzaa Gamble
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Defiant
ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife
If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life

Nice opener

Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears
there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years

Cool play. Wording could've been a lil better.

a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan
career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man

Lol aight.

Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut
The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut

Nice closer.

Overall pretty solid verse.

Saint

i stay w/

Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds
His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house

Lol okay cool opener.

Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages
spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist

Nice nameplay.

You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson
Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection

Very creative. Delivery was okay.

Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE
only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece

Good personal. Solid close.

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Overall pretty solid battle, tough decision here as I feel both were good and lacked in certain areas. Gonn a be a toss up here, but I gotta re read it and come back and make a final decision.

Think Saint might've edged this one but great battle fellas.

V- Saint
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