.Goodnight Fox.
I don't have a Midnight Deadline like HOL. (Or 12:17-18 whatever he hit.)
4/21/23
Quote:
Originally Posted by Witty
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...169#post833169
On second read it's even less close.
Lars this verse is really really fucking good. I would love you to move away from the tried and tested, maybe not in a league but in OM. I think you can create something more 'abstract' for lack of a better term because your wording is exceptional.
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3/16/23
Quote:
Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army
@ Nigma
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=150909
Good stuff man...
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I'd like to see you step outside your comfort zone sometime, even if just a quickie....perhaps try something more concrete/ less nuanced/ more direct/ dare I say more "vapid" (purposefully)...with your technical abilities it could certainly be exceptional with the right tone/ideas....
NOT saying to quit abstract rhyme extravaganzas...those r very important...
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