I dunno what people look for on here lol.
Cereal. Cool concept but as always the wording took away from it. Not sure if it's you being from Australia or wherever or if it's just preference but things like that second line rub me the wrong way. If you could take the creative concepts you approach and have a smoother technical prowess I really feel like you'd be a champ. But as I feel like that's working against you.
Rock this was the opposite. Weaker concept but much more solid technique. Fluent writing from start to finish. Maybe more poetic or like a rock song lyrics than the typical topical but I vibes with it. Good stuff.
Again. Sorry for the wack vote. On my phone and just got off work.
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You're a really talented writer. And I've only ever said that to Baron Mynd.
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