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Pharaohs Army · 02-14-2023, 12:33 AM

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Really wish I saw this1 over a year ago Wise...
YOU have been/ are doing things that I do, (&like to do) & Others do &(like to do)...and that IS
Constantly Connecting Quick-hitting rhymez, whilst keeping the flow AND creativity/phraseology that makes the reader inquisitive and/or "relatable" on one end, impressed & possibly mind-fucked on the high end (of the sprectrum)... lol

And NO not every single line or couplet or 3-4 line block will be AS dope as some b4 or after it, but youuu sir keep it up for QUITE a while...in your history of writing
(OBVIOUSLy way better when you spend time & write/edit VS. a quicker-key)...
And based on the quality content here, I'd say the former was employed on this date, at the end of 2021...(u maybe) Really took some time to "make it fit", etc.

You're phraseology is inspiring, something myself &others' aspire for...
So distractive, scrambled pressure omelet
So many sick rhymes/phrasez in 'dis inquisitive/INSTRUCTIVE piece, lol.
But this one sticks out...

And, on an egotistical note, as some of you may know, I enjoy browsing the lime because of all the "connections"/avatar/pics/friends/links/walls, SOOO the CONTENT of this relates to MOST writers,,,,but especially me as I "ride" you hard all the way to the sunset on thisss verse's feed.. ONLY cuz I think it's more polished than some of your other drops when you were droppin'. and the phrasing is vintage W.W. BECAUSE it was strong Top 2 Bottom... didn't have a Wise-quick-key-we'll keep that1 in there hiccup...(not that there's many of those; just addressing the noticeable "quality gulfs").

Top Notch and Every1 should read, so I've upped after missing it.!
Inspiring, breh...Not perfect but gettin' there

neeeeextt*********

02-14-2023, 12:33 AM	#5
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	up * reserved for feed dis week ========================= (2023 NEW FEED) Really wish I saw this1 over a year ago Wise... YOU have been/ are doing things that I do, (&like to do) & Others do &(like to do)...and that IS Constantly Connecting Quick-hitting rhymez, whilst keeping the flow AND creativity/phraseology that makes the reader inquisitive and/or "relatable" on one end, impressed & possibly mind-fucked on the high end (of the sprectrum)... lol And NO not every single line or couplet or 3-4 line block will be AS dope as some b4 or after it, but youuu sir keep it up for QUITE a while...in your history of writing (OBVIOUSLy way better when you spend time & write/edit VS. a quicker-key)... And based on the quality content here, I'd say the former was employed on this date, at the end of 2021...(u maybe) Really took some time to "make it fit", etc. You're phraseology is inspiring, something myself &others' aspire for... So distractive, scrambled pressure omelet So many sick rhymes/phrasez in 'dis inquisitive/INSTRUCTIVE piece, lol. But this one sticks out... And, on an egotistical note, as some of you may know, I enjoy browsing the lime because of all the "connections"/avatar/pics/friends/links/walls, SOOO the CONTENT of this relates to MOST writers,,,,but especially me as I "ride" you hard all the way to the sunset on thisss verse's feed.. ONLY cuz I think it's more polished than some of your other drops when you were droppin'. and the phrasing is vintage W.W. BECAUSE it was strong Top 2 Bottom... didn't have a Wise-quick-key-we'll keep that1 in there hiccup...(not that there's many of those; just addressing the noticeable "quality gulfs"). Top Notch and Every1 should read, so I've upped after missing it.! Inspiring, breh...Not perfect but gettin' there neeeeextt********* Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-16-2023 at 11:08 PM.