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Old 02-02-2023, 10:02 PM   #16
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This had to be Civil's and weel as DG's best verses I have read thus far. Civil seemed to have taken more time and care in his verse than I have witnessed in the past. DG seems to be begins to show more flare. Her verse felt more alive and stylized in a way that I haven't seen from her before but showed some of her signature phrases sprinkled within. I would have called it a tie, however Civil have three to four instances where I would consider as quotable as well as a more rounded story. For instance:
"I ****** promise I had finer ******* in my bed but I didn’t care
My heart grew for you rather than anyone else who lingered there"
I am giving it to Civil slightly. But DG did her thing, keep it up. I look forward seeing you develop.
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